150-word version (out of 150 word limit): U of Notre Dame
As I researched and researched, I became thoroughly convinced Notre Dame is where I belong as I can definitely achieve its goals, to not only endeavor for personal achievements but also to be concerned with the community...

990-character version (out of 1000 character limit): Brown
I became thoroughly convinced that Brown is where I belong as I can definitely achieve its goals, to explore the knowledge and understanding of the world, to contribute to the society in diverse and useful ways, and to value independence and diversity to render creativity that would allow further improvement of the world...

245-word version: Emory
As I researched and researched, I became thoroughly convinced that Emory University is where I belong as I am definitely diversified in terms of culture and background. My circumstances were opportune enough to render me 15 years of an engaging life in China, and I became naturally inclined to learn more about and know by heart its culture and traditions...

288-word version: Duke
As I researched and researched, I became thoroughly convinced that Duke University is where I belong as I can definitely achieve its goals, be encouraged to cultivate leadership skills so that I may contribute to the enlightening of the future, and I am certain that I have been endeavoring to accomplish just such goals...