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Common Application: Supplementary Essay(s) (4 versions)
 
Carnegie Mellon U: Please submit a one page, single-spaced essay that explains why you have chosen Carnegie Mellon and your particular major(s), department(s) or program(s). This essay should include the reasons why you've chosen the major(s), any goals or relevant work plans and any other information you would like us to know. For freshmen applying to more than one college or program, please mention each college or program to which you are applying. Because our admission committees review applicants by college and program, your essay can impact our final decision. Candidates applying for early decision or transfer may apply to only one college and department.
 
Version 1: 773 words
In team sports, individual skills alone cannot win the game. Every player must coordinate with one another in order to make the plays work...
 
Emory Oxford College (optional): Unique to Emory University, Oxford College is a small liberal arts campus with more intimate class sizes, faculty dedicated to experiential learning, and unique leadership opportunities early in the undergraduate college career. This environment, which is optimized for freshmen and sophomore students, is located at Emory’s birthplace in Oxford, GA.
 
Think about your own first two years of college. What type of academic and co-curricular accomplishments would you like to achieve, and how do you think Oxford will help foster them? (500 word limit)
 
Version 2: 500 words
In order to become at least a decent athlete, he needs to put in more time, practice individually, and personalize his efforts to develop, enhance, and perfect his skills...
 
Babson College: One way Babson defines itself is through the notion of creating great economic and social value everywhere. How do you define yourself and what is it about Babson that excites you?
 
We invite you to submit your answer in either essay OR video format. If you choose to submit an essay, please limit your response to 1 page. If you choose to submit a video, please limit your response to a 1-minute video, which can be submitted via a shared link to YouTube or another video hosting website. (maximum 500 words)
 
Version 3-1: 499 words
In team sports, individual skills alone cannot win the game. Every player must coordinate with one another in order to make the plays work...
 
Version 3-2: 444 words
The way I see it, there are two types economic values, tangible and intangible ones...
 
U of Wisconsin—Madison: Additional Statement
Tell us why you decided to apply to the University of Wisconsin-Madison. In addition, share with us the academic, extracurricular, or research opportunities you would take advantage of as a student. If applicable, provide details of any circumstance that could have had an impact on your academic performance and/or extracurricular involvement.
 
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In team sports, individual skills alone cannot win the game. Every player must coordinate with one another in order to make the plays work...
 
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