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After my counselor told me about Brown, I tried to find information on Brown through the Internet...

 

Version 2 (490 characters):
To immerse myself better in the application of economics, I interned at the International Branch of Korean Securities...

 

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Last April, Brown’s Director of International Admission, Ms. 관계자이름 visited our school. She said that Brown encouraged its students to experiment...

 

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Ruth Simmons, the current president of Brown and the first female African American to head an Ivy League school, has first interested me in Brown...

 

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My interest in Brown came about because of Ruth Simmons, the current president of Brown and the first female African American to head an Ivy League school...