UIUC: The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign values excellence, inclusion, and service. With these values in mind, write a 500-800 word essay about your own past experiences and future aspirations as they relate to seeking a college education on this campus.
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After hanging up the phone, I went straight to my room and immediately burst into tears. I saw my life flash before me and felt it quickly coming to an end. As I tried to gain composure, I tried to think of what to do. What to say to my parents, friends and teachers who expected a lot from me. Everything was dark as if a heavy curtain had been pulled over my future.
...Growing up, I was charmed by the many drawings of my aunt. She lived with my family for a long time. During these years, she showed me her drawings and taught me how to draw...