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U of Michigan: Which one activity would you continue? (6 versions)
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If you could only do one of the activities above, which one would you keep doing? Why?

Version 1 (46 words):
I would continue science club, Ŭ·´¸í. Since I was young, I have always been interested in science...

Version 2 (63 words):
I would like to continue field hockey. From my freshman year, I have been devoted to field hockey...

Version 3 (65 words):
I really enjoyed and learned a lot from the school newspaper, suggesting ideas, making decisions, and working in groups...

Version 4 (71 words):
...Helping needy people and knowing that I can make a difference in someone’s life is a wonderful learning experience...

Version 5 (76 words):
...I also learned that to be persuasive and compelling, not only words but also action, that is, setting an example, must go hand in hand.

Version 6 (81 words):
Because Korean music classes only taught theory, music was rather a dull subject for me until I came to Canada and joined the band...

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