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Personal Essay: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. (Min: 250 / Max: 650)
 
It is not Tim Berners-Lee then at CERN in Switzerland and his “world wide web” that heralded the advent of the Information Age. It is not Steve Jobs there at Apple Inc. and his iPhone that revolutionized the 21st century way of life...
 
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Princeton U: In addition to the essay you have written for the Common Application, please write an essay of about 500 words (no more than 650 words and no fewer than 250 words). Using one of the themes below as a starting point, write about a person, event, or experience that helped you define one of your values or in some way changed how you approach the world. Please do not repeat, in full or in part, the essay you wrote for the Common Application.
 
- Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way.
 
It is not the Nobel Prizes of its alumnus. It is not the Pulitzer Prizes of its alumna. It is not even the Academy Awards of its alumni that attracts me to Princeton...
 
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