535-word version:
For the fourth time, my explanation on the results was rejected by Mr. ¼±»ý´Ô¼ºÇÔ, my advisor of the project. Disappointed, I came out of the science class feebly. For the past two months, I had gathered data for my science project. It was hard work. Every couple of days I had to go to the green house which often went over 38 Celsius degrees...to...record...significant changes...
449-word version:
For the fourth time, my explanation on the results was rejected by Mr. ¼±»ý´Ô¼ºÇÔ, my science project advisor. Disappointed, I came out of the science class feebly. For the past two months, I had gathered data for my science project. It was hard work. Every couple of days I had to go to the green house that often went over 38 Celsius degrees...to...record...significant changes...
422-word version:
For the fourth time, my explanation on the results was rejected by Mr. ¼±»ý´Ô¼ºÇÔ, my advisor of the project. Disappointed, I came out of the science class feebly. For the past two months, I had gathered data for my science project. It was hard work. Every couple of days I had to go to the green house which often went over 38 Celsius degrees...to...record...significant changes...
Duke Versions
If you have participated in any significant research activity outside of school, please provide a brief description and limit your response to one or two paragraphs.
227-word version:
For the fourth time, my theory on the results was dismissed by Mr. ¼±»ý´Ô¼ºÇÔ, my science project advisor. Early in the summer, when Mr. ¼±»ý´Ô¼ºÇÔ approved my idea..., I thought everything would go smoothly...