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Uncommon Application: Personal Essay (467 words)
 
UC—Berkeley: Personal Statement 1
Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
 
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At our preferred Taiwanese restaurant, the waiter escorted my family to our usual table. Then, he asked, “Would you like the usual menu?” Before my father got a chance, I replied, “Yes! And for the dessert, please give us smoothies!” Everyone laughed at my love for mango smoothies...
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