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Common Application: Personal Essay (8 versions)
 
CommonApp: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
 
Version 1: 650 words
I have in my brain a certain aspect of knowledge, generally not normal to an average person. It all began with baseball on September 3, 2006, when I watched my first full professional game between the Yankees and the Minnesota Twins with my father...
 
BC: We would like to get a better sense of you. Please respond to one of the following prompts. (400 word limit)
 
Human beings have a creative side that tends to shine most when we are truly invested in the world around us. Describe a situation when you responded effectively to a particular need and found yourself at your creative best.
 
Version 2-1: 400 words
Like any other ordinary high school student, I would be lying if I said I am not interested in online games at all. On the contrary, rather overly candid it may sound, I am actually excited to say that I enjoy them immensely...
 
Version 2-2: 400 words
Like any other ordinary high school student, I would be lying if I said I am not interested in online games at all. On the contrary, rather overly candid it may sound, I am actually excited to say that I enjoy them immensely...
 
Version 2-3: 400 words
Although I cannot certainly say that I enjoy every category of online games, I can say with certainty that I do revel in those related to sports of every variety...
 
UIUC (Second Choice Major Essay): Explain your interest in the major you selected and describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest, inside and/or outside the classroom. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals. Limit your response to 300-400 words.
 
Version 3: 400 words
Although I cannot certainly say that I enjoy every category of online games, I can say with certainty that I do revel in those related to sports of every variety...
 
UW—Madison: Consider something in your life you think goes unnoticed and write about why it's important to you (you may enter up to 650 words).
 
Version 4: 350 words
...Of course, playing online games does not sit too well with my, or any, parents, for that matter, however affectionate and supportive they are of their children...
 
UC (Personal Insight Questions): What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
 
Version 5: 348 words
...Of course, playing online games does not sit too well with my, or any, parents, for that matter, however affectionate and supportive they are of their children...
 
USC: Please respond to one of the prompts below. (250 word limit)
 
What is something about yourself that is essential to understanding you?
 
Version 6: 250 words
...their initial encounter with my gibberish left them eternally standing at my door as if they had just survived an out-of-the-body experience...
 
BU: Additional Information (optional): Please use this space if you have additional information, materials, or writing samples you would like us to consider.
 
Version 7-1: 252 words
...though their initial encounter with my gibberish left them eternally standing at my door as if they had just survived an out-of-the-body experience...
 
Version 7-2: 262 words
...Nowadays I actually bring fun to my family during any of our gatherings that present an opportunity for a bout of any game from chess to poker to monopoly...
 
Purdue U: Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences. (250 word maximum)
 
Version 8-1: 250 words
...Nowadays I actually bring fun to my family during any of our gatherings that present an opportunity for a bout of any game from chess to Monopoly to Nintendo...
 
Version 8-2: 328 words
...Nowadays I actually bring fun to my family during any of our gatherings that present an opportunity for a bout of any game from chess to poker to monopoly...
 
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