390-word version:
Toiling in a restaurant as a waiter and a member of the pots and pans crew for thirty-five hours a week had enhanced nearly every part of my corporeal senses from ocular, for any visions to come, to auditory, for any empathy or sympathy that I may develop, and from physical, for any laborious vocation, to mental, for any contemplations that may lie ahead...
497-word version:
Toiling in a restaurant as a waiter and a member of the pots and pans crew for thirty-five hours a week had enhanced nearly every part of my corporeal senses. By scrutinizing a customer’s countenance as I walk up to the table with a trained smile, I could almost discern what his or her order for the day would be, toning my ocular senses for any visions to come...
606-word version:
...Toiling in a restaurant as a waiter and a member of the pots and pans crew for thirty-five hours a week had enhanced nearly every part of my corporeal senses. By scrutinizing a customer’s countenance as I walk up to the table with a trained smile, I could almost discern what his or her order for the day would be, toning my ocular senses for any visions to come...