763-word version:

Through the gaps in the gloomy clouds, the dark-blue rain drops fall on me. As if the rain can read my mind, it flows with the saddened flow of my tears.

"Here! Here!" I beckon with my hands to the paramedics and lead them into my house. And my sister, the ‘Sleeping Beauty,’ is taken away to an emergency room, waiting for her ‘Prince’ to awaken her.

Even after the gastric lavage, my sister does not wake up. “Mary, Mary, wake up!” I call her again and again, but she does not move, just like a dead person...

297-word version:
Through the gaps in the gloomy clouds, the dark-blue rain drops fall on me. As if the rain can read my mind, it flows with the saddened flow of my tears...