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As I settled in 지역명 when I first moved to the United States, assimilated into the New England culture, and became appreciative of every aspect 지역명 and New England had to offer from its snowbound yet mild winter climate to its people, not too hurried like New Yorkers and not too relaxed like Californians, I am now hopeful to explore the capitol of my accustomed residence...

Tell us why you decided to apply to the University of Wisconsin-Madison. In addition, share with us the academic, extracurricular, or research opportunities you would take advantage of as a student. If applicable, provide details of any circumstance that could have had an impact on your academic performance and/or extracurricular involvement.

 

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...Although many athletes might argue that the body is more dexterous than the mind, and I do grant the validity of the argument as I can dodge round my defender with a feign move more often than not, in my opinion, the mind is by far more capable than any ambidextrous limbs or sensory vitals of the body...