151-word version: UC—Berkeley
To UC Admissions Office:
Hi! My name is ÇÊÀÚÀ̸§ (UC Application ID: 0000000). I’m really sorry to bother you during this holiday season, but I’m writing to you today, because I realized that I’d made a mistake in my course and activity listings...
Sincerely,
ÇÊÀÚÀ̸§
140-word version: UIUC (U of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign)
To UIUC Admissions Office:
Hi! My name is ÇÊÀÚÀ̸§ (UIUC Application ID: 000000). I’m really sorry to bother you during this holiday season, but I’m writing to you today, because I realized that I’d made a mistake in my activity listings...
Sincerely,
ÇÊÀÚÀ̸§