UC—Berkeley: Additional Comments (optional) If you wish, you may use this space to tell us anything else you want us to know about you that you have not had the opportunity to describe elsewhere in the application. (no more than 550 words) Virginia Tech: Freshman Applicant Personal Stat..

다음은 조지타운대학(Georgetown U)과 프린스턴대학(Princeton U)의 활동(Activity) 관련 주제에 관한 에세이(각각 255 단어와 188 단어로 작성)입니다. 지키지 못한 약속을 통해 자신을 돌아보게 되는 스토리로 짧지만 깊은 여운을 남기는 내용이 인상적인 에세이입니다. Georgetown U: Briefly discuss the signif..

I was handing out prescriptions when I caught your eyes peeping in. You were different because you held my hands when everyone else shied away...

92-word version: I volunteered at a Red Cross hospital in Korea. I was responsible for odd jobs that quickly became tedious... 154-word version: ...I was responsible for organizing charts, cleaning rooms, and translating documents, and the work quickly became tedious... 181-word version:..

156-word version: I met my 7th grader webbies for the first time as their peer mentor on the first day of school... 282-word version: ...Although my webbies might have thought strangely of me for my suggestion, I needed something to break the ice and to get to know each other better...

다음은 각각 MIT(매사추세츠공대)와 Caltech(캘리포니아공대)의 고유 주제인 “significant challenge”와 “ethical dilemma” 그리고 프린스턴대학(Princeton U)과 스탠퍼드대학(Stanford U)의 활동(Activity) 관련 주제에 관한 에세이(각각 250 단어와 150 단어 그리고 100 단어로 작성)입니다...