161-word version: U of Rochester The graphite in our mechanical pencils is easily broken with even the slightest pressure applied on to it. But the graphite, under different circumstances, can be surprisingly sturdy even against bulletproof glass. It does not break when it is dropped from 502ft hi..

...Since my school year has officially ended (as Korean high school seniors graduate in February), I wanted to inform you of the work that I have been doing since the end of classes and which I thought would be relevant to and useful for further consideration of my application...

724-character version (out of 750 character limit): Rochester The first impression that I received from the representative of Rochester who was visiting my high school was amicability... 184-word version: Emory Oxford The first impression that I received from the representative of Oxford College,..

100-word version (out of 100 word limit): Rochester From my experiences of other cultures, I found my aspiration and potential. I love traveling and living in other countries. As Rochester provides rigorous language programs and gives students numerous opportunities to study abroad, I am convinced..

Based on my research of the University of Rochester, the initial impression I received was that the University of Rochester was a place where students went to learn for the love of learning, and took classes because they were interested in the subject, not merely because they were required to do s..

BU: In a few sentences, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission? (750 characters) 732-character version: Boston U BU exceeds all the qualities that I aspire in a university. The sheer number of inspiring programs, the extensive college..