179-word version:
Before becoming seriously enthused in music, “Their song inspired me to become a singer” was the modest cliché I thought many singers used as mere euphemism. Letting Queen’s music permeate into my deepest of thoughts, however, I was able to get a clear grasp of what those singers were trying to convey...

196-word version:
Before becoming seriously enthused in music, “Their song inspired me to become a singer” was the modest cliché I thought many singers used as mere euphemism. Not just listening to but letting Queen’s music permeate into my deepest of thoughts, however, I was able to get a clear grasp of what those singers were trying to convey...