Seoul’s sky was grey as usual. It was rush hour and the traffic at this time spewed tons of carbon emissions that lingered effortlessly above Seoul’s cityscape. To its credit the smog did help create some of the most beautiful sunsets I’ve seen. That day, the amber and pinkish hu..

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