92-word version: I volunteered at a Red Cross hospital in Korea. I was responsible for odd jobs that quickly became tedious... 154-word version: ...I was responsible for organizing charts, cleaning rooms, and translating documents, and the work quickly became tedious... 181-word version:..

I was handing out prescriptions when I caught your eyes peeping in. You were different because you held my hands when everyone else shied away...

다음은 조지타운대학(Georgetown U)과 프린스턴대학(Princeton U)의 활동(Activity) 관련 주제에 관한 에세이(각각 255 단어와 188 단어로 작성)입니다. 지키지 못한 약속을 통해 자신을 돌아보게 되는 스토리로 짧지만 깊은 여운을 남기는 내용이 인상적인 에세이입니다. Georgetown U: Briefly discuss the signif..

UC—Berkeley: Additional Comments (optional) If you wish, you may use this space to tell us anything else you want us to know about you that you have not had the opportunity to describe elsewhere in the application. (no more than 550 words) Virginia Tech: Freshman Applicant Personal Stat..

I worked as a volunteer at the 기관명 Art Therapy Program in Korea. It was a program for children who utterly lacked communication with their parents. I participated in their art therapy program twice a week...

다음은 다트머스대학(Dartmouth College)의 고유 주제 중에 하나인 “be kind”와 조지타운대학(Georgetown University)의 활동(Activity) 관련 주제에 대한 내용입니다. 스토리의 근원은 유기동물보호센터 봉사활동이란 매우 평범한 소재에서부터 비롯되었지만, 자아실현 과정이 매우 구체적이고 설득력 있는..