229-word version:
I love art. I love to portray and express my thoughts in paper and create my own stylized art work. However, I doubted that my art pieces were as outstanding as those of others...

367-word version:
I love art. I love to portray and express my thoughts in paper and create my own stylized art work. However, I doubted that my art pieces were as outstanding as those of others. When I was doing community service in the home for the aged, I always felt pity for the grandfathers and grandmothers who stayed there...

448-word version:
I love art. I love to portray and express my thoughts in paper and create my own stylized art work. However, I doubted that my art pieces were as outstanding as those of others. When I was doing community service in the home for the aged, I always felt pity for the grandfathers and grandmothers who stayed there and would probably stay for their rest of their lives...