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Common Application: Additional Information (3 versions)
 
Please provide an answer below if you wish to provide details of circumstances or qualifications not reflected in the application. You may enter up to 650 words.
 
UIUC: Academic Challenges
Have you faced any challenges throughout your academic career that you feel we should be aware of while reviewing your application?
 
Do you have a low grade or a drop in grades that you have not already explained? Is there anything else we need to know regarding your academic history?
 
UT—Austin: Topic B (optional)
Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Did it change you? If so, how?
 
If you are submitting your essay online, it must be no longer than 120 eighty-character lines of text (including spaces and blank lines).
 
Version 1: 288 wordw
...I was completely short-sighted with regard to high school and its courses during my first year in Chungdam High School...
 
Version 2: 117 words
Although I do admit now that it sounds pathetically apologetic, I was completely immature...
 
UC—Berkeley: Additional Comments (optional)
Tell us anything else you want us to know about your academic record that you have not had the opportunity to describe elsewhere in this section.
 
International applicants: If you selected Other as your school's grading system, please explain the grading system here.
 
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Although I do admit it sounds pathetically apologetic, I was completely immature...
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