If you were a member of the committee that was reviewing this (your) application, what is the single most important aspect of your application that you would emphasize in order to convince the rest of the committee to offer this candidate (you) admission and why? (750 characters)

745-character version:
Although it is impossible to evaluate a person based on written convictions or numerical values, I would say 필자이름 is a good match for NYU because she is committed to building a sincerely altruistic career...

750-character version:
If I were a member of the committee, I would emphasize the fact that I am bringing in diversity into the student body, not because of my race, but why I chose hospitality field as my major...