Common Application: Supplementary Essay(s) (2 versions)
Carnegie Mellon U: Please submit a one page, single-spaced essay that explains why you have chosen Carnegie Mellon and your particular major(s), department(s) or program(s). This essay should include the reasons why you've chosen the major(s), any goals or relevant work plans and any other information you would like us to know. For freshmen applying to more than one college or program, please mention each college or program to which you are applying. Because our admission committees review applicants by college and program, your essay can impact our final decision. Candidates applying for early decision or transfer may apply to only one college and department.
Version 1: 808 words
...Moreover, through my active involvement in MUN, I became extremely interested in the topic of Cyber Security. In 9th and 10th grades, I participated in MUN as a delegate with the same topic, once a delegate of France, and the other as a delegate of North Korea, the country that supposedly wreaked the havoc...
Version 2: 828 words
...Moreover, through my active involvement in MUN, I became extremely interested in the topic of Cyber Security. In 9th and 10th grades, I participated in MUN as a delegate with the same topic, once a delegate of France, and the other as a delegate of North Korea, the country that supposedly wreaked the havoc...