Common Application: Personal Essay (6 versions)
CommonApp: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
Version 1: 650 words
...If I could manage to get the game makers to act as a mediator between sports teams and advertisers, I could build a model of collaboration that is mutually beneficial...
Version 2: 650 words
...If I could manage to get the game makers to act as a mediator between sports teams and advertisers, I could build a model of collaboration that is mutually beneficial...
Version 3: 650 words
...If I could manage to get the game makers to act as a mediator between sports teams and advertisers, I could build a model of collaboration that is mutually beneficial...
UC (Personal Insight Questions): What is the one thing that you think sets you apart from other candidates applying to the University of California?
Version 4: 348 words
...What began ten years ago...evolved to a natural attribute that is now an inseparable part of me, a unique aspect of knowledge of sports unparalleled to any average person.
UC (Personal Insight Questions): Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
Version 5: 350 words
...If I could manage to get the game makers to act as a mediator between sports teams and advertisers, I could realize a model of collaboration that is mutually beneficial...
Emory (Supplements): What are you most excited about or looking forward to in your college experience? (150 words)
Version 6-1: 150 words
Opportunities to assess my ideas for expediency...
Version 6-2: 150 words
Opportunities to assess my ideas for expediency...
Version 6-3: 150 words
Jerry McGuire as it animated my ambition in sports...
Version 6-4: 150 words
Opportunities to explore and assess my ideas for expediency...