97-word version:
As the dorm proctor and the captain of Wooden Soldiers, a precision military drilling squad, I have experienced both ends of leadership...

153-word version:
As proctor of a dorm resided by 120 girls...and the captain of Wooden Soldiers, a precision military drilling squad comprised of 10 girls, I have experienced both ends of leadership...

239-word version:
As proctor of a dorm resided by 120 girls from grades 6 to 11 and the captain of Wooden Soldiers, a precision military drilling squad comprised of 10 girls, I have experienced both ends of leadership...